【08.11.01】 歌词翻译大奖赛公告（参赛视频18、19楼）(比赛结果已公布～）

vichida

翻译大人，正在开始译．带点民歌风味的，又被翻成英文，转了两道手，好像没什么感觉，偶又是音盲．哎，要是懂泰文好些．
8 U' b0 T! F3 n* n" _5 c" P袖子亲也来，太好了．这活适合你干．

lily_zl

我们尽力而为就好了。本来就没有最佳翻译一说，只能更精益求精。

aoiwang

主题曲参赛译稿
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2 T2 w/ K$ [) n7 V6 v( W& D6 CThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
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我想我從未表露出
! O- D4 z# v3 X7 v深藏在我心底的那句
$ G0 Y" A0 E% C% J' Y我愛你  

4 M, t9 s/ n- c9 B; pFrom the first moment we met,
$ L0 \+ F$ E3 bI already loved you with all my heart
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1 e7 m+ z; j$ V/ e/ W在遇見你的第一刻
你已經深深的佔領了
我的心
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We meet and talk everyday,
8 p% i! S# {5 r, u# m/ G6 f6 yBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart

縱然朝夕相處
還是不能肯定你的心意
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) T# @8 g. D0 A- aIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
* j- o0 A1 Y* V8 y" II would probably know how you feel
凝視著你的眼
搜尋著你的魂
; O9 r, j+ T6 j# J5 w我也許就能了解
" ?( [3 x4 l, [/ K# K+ e7 h/ h你的心情

Love… just the word love
1 P( i, F" Y( s% tWhy is it so difficult to express?
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愛  簡單的一句愛
為什麼
# ?2 G, V( |* \3 y0 P如此難以表白?
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2 g4 m& B- P& V) J) ^I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
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) T$ O  g8 m+ i$ l8 B愛你 想要告訴你
9 h( {9 v. u8 F# t  r卻總是說不出來

One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
# S  s9 q- N2 W1 u; Q也許有一天
% ~0 x, |4 V) y& Q你將從我指間滑漏
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$ Z# _/ h8 ?* c: E7 Z( T" m& OIf today isn’t too late,
4 }" N& }/ i( b: eI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess

7 H' C) {, h" k希望今天還不會太晚
讓我向你表白
6 G+ z: I' l) j7 h+ K我心底的秘密
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I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
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不要讓我的深情 隨風而逝
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Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
! r& V1 ?0 U' b, F3 S; q可否讓我托付給你?
: C  o) Z: D3 @* C. @$ A托付我的愛
& E" ?* @% L& |+ j收在你心裡

8 z- W; l+ t* D, w; a4 ULove… just the word love
  w2 A: s2 m+ P) [0 G5 MWhy is it so difficult to express?
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愛  簡單一句愛
, i+ l* k' ?3 s0 {為什麼如此難以表白?

I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
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愛你 我想要告訴你
% }) y1 `; W4 m卻還是說不出來
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One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
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, K! N' I# [; A% d# Y也許有一天
你將從我指間滑漏

+ j6 r4 g+ m3 cIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess

0 R  D) ~/ e! x! e% x0 u. @希望今天還不會太晚
讓我向你表白
我心底的秘密
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7 Q' F' S7 Y5 X0 CI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
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不要讓我的深情 隨風而逝

Can I entrust it to you?
& [3 C( C, [/ D" |5 K: gEntrust my love within your heart

1 n% ~' v4 p2 O/ d7 Z$ I6 u可否讓我托付給你?
1 H$ I9 c' K4 ~2 S* G# g; M托付我的愛
收在你心裡
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Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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可否讓我托付給你?
8 b9 ~1 E! ^/ F" R8 |% @0 \托付我的愛 收在你心裡
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& w3 s9 U" Y! S2 q0 L对唱曲参赛译稿

7 s' H5 Z, Z0 z& o* eThe moonlight is shining brightly,
0 D2 o/ A3 o  a5 L( Y) w0 {5 z2 IMaking the sky glitter like gold,
0 ]( v  y9 |  U$ o- L& gWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness

$ m' j3 }5 S  Q4 Z' I皎潔月光下
天空金銀閃爍
凝視著星空
我心充滿快樂

7 e4 `9 |& q+ ^The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
& K& a; m3 _; ?8 S- bWith the moon kissing it every night
& w. f" ^( {. L/ |5 T6 A1 `Seeing the sky content with its love

月光映在我的眼底
9 K: v/ o( \, D4 h1 d" q( E( z* b月夜陪著我一起沉醉
/ n4 F4 W* c* U+ ~2 h$ B0 s月光輕吻著夜幕
星空充滿著歡樂
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" x3 _+ @: V* BIt fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour
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5 v$ p' x0 z1 e1 U我心卻充斥著憂鬱
7 O  J( c4 N  M: F/ I6 p害怕我們的愛
0 G% N$ P" G8 m' B終將逝去
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( \2 Y( A, G& N, \7 T9 i; \You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily

- t8 U3 ^! I! G8 h- V& |- z你勿須擔心憂鬱
$ w6 \- H( H) q0 A# ]我心充滿著歡欣
愛你
堅定不渝
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Every other word you utter is love
. v* N$ d  C7 `0 ^I really want to know just how much you love me

& j7 F$ C' x$ e$ c  G% m你的一言一語都是愛
我真的想知道你到底愛我多少

I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
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我的愛 全心全意
. l# |3 G( D5 V' D; `; P你要知道 我的愛無與倫比
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Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?

能覆蓋半個天空嗎?

The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
整個天空 也不及我一半的愛
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I want so much to see inside your heart

我想看透你的心

3 I3 o" B+ z6 O- V# ?2 R3 kI invite you to rip it out
3 q, ?; Z5 W& X, q  {8 {! a! w7 \* G$ fTo prove my love, I’m willing to die

: g  c" y% e& @我歡迎你將它打開
- Q' K4 ~/ K+ ~7 x我願意用生命
來證明我的愛
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7 `( l- x1 i$ |( x- z( UI’m still filled with fear
# F* N. P- |9 ^  PYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
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6 s$ C* ^) Y; ]/ p+ ?' ]我依然滿心憂鬱
, `7 W+ J- R# f; b# v0 t# e你千百張口 銀般閃爍的巧語
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3 s! y2 G' E3 U& G. qI regret not dying
7 J' n0 L: j. M, ]# m* R) u$ @: o' MI only have one tongue
& s, M3 D. `& aIt’s nothing close to 100,000

( k, d* p: I( h1 z) i可惜我未能以死證明
我只有一張口
遠遠不及千萬
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. B+ R% U% }# PWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it

這樣一張巧舌
/ q7 p9 q% q  H你的言語都跟不上
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If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
9 O8 ~! D/ K( V/ o如果我真有千百張口
8 J6 K  \; Q3 u我將對你訴說
千萬個心思

& V; v& A- ]) }7 O8 P& H4 T& w5 d4 PRambling on about a thousand words of love
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, c3 D' w' n* Z! ~4 I: ^" _: H訴說千萬個
# I1 s; q1 o( }/ c愛的心思

杏花疏影

对唱歌感觉是民歌小调，很热烈，很难译。就民歌风格来说（不知道是不是真的是民歌），要比流行歌讲究对仗，并且隐喻很多，个人感觉对唱的这一首翻译难度比主题曲大。话说这首对唱歌可真热烈啊，呵呵！也向对楼主说 ...
+ k1 ^8 _0 C8 R9 [, A, Ixxiuzi 发表于 2009-1-1 03:11

5 g7 X% K+ n2 g是啊，不知对唱歌词有没有俚语在里面。

vichida

哦呀，你们都贴在这里，偶昨晚贴在那个歌词的帖子后面了。老大，谢谢提醒