【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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: z) \6 ^* c& ?4 B5 x6 _歌词我附在后面。
. n0 z1 |  a9 K& k4 G# UThe moonlight is shining brightly,
; \& F& `. _' L5 M, P( y& c  t% C0 iMaking the sky glitter like gold,
- p2 E9 `7 d% [3 [% e  x4 rWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
* d, ~) T7 v* S* z$ jThe sky is happy down to its soul
, c7 c1 j1 c6 h+ A6 Z- IWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
1 O! ]- T. V" X1 CMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
8 d+ _5 U! j* F: ]Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
9 D2 ^' Y" o7 R8 R, L% y/ C6 BI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
" G! \& H0 j' B$ W% ~& V. T1 {1 CThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
/ A4 b. A3 k& w: ~7 k7 qI want so much to see inside your heart
  g; R4 R. ^$ E  uI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
' \2 k+ u1 W  m( f- jI’m still filled with fear
2 k, Q: U, N0 k7 M4 G4 gYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
1 g5 Q( C& f* o6 G+ aI regret not dying
4 U# u! w: V( B* uI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
; F( N9 `1 ]7 |  P6 _+ f/ {With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
0 Z. v( R* {; O9 o* j0 W0 j( h<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
1 k/ V4 a/ t2 y/ y3 K( z3 R6 ~. D: q<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
3 H4 F- D! a& _, w& s# K<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
* z( z3 f! j+ E3 R; F5 X+ P6 x<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
% p* ~- K9 @2 w) `9 p4 c$ x<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
6 s% \4 s! y2 T8 W( w+ t<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
1 F4 L- O5 k9 @% }<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
0 b+ }: R( E2 ~; ~9 R( T  L5 K<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
; K0 ~8 c  K" n: p<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
7 z, Y( K2 f) u8 J% ^; P# h<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
1 `0 s9 z4 I6 x& h5 f<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
- i. B9 \/ j$ u) U7 C1 p, v7 z2 P<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
% |% p3 E1 E$ K! y- B/ ~- B$ a8 J<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
/ _" s0 w  U) K9 \$ \2 g9 ^<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
& P2 i' B  J9 K$ `<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
2 K4 W3 V2 |; D2 F- G<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
. J7 T5 ~6 E5 x' X<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
% f. b4 g" O4 g1 Y9 a% N<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
) O5 P  T- u. C7 y& ^  o; P3 o<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
2 \8 K/ I* v1 g0 P3 r3 `$ z+ `& q4 E<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
1 B$ W8 ?) N5 c* w1 S<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
- u9 i9 C9 Y& S" f8 [<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
! q' A' q" b2 X6 v5 v<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
; j$ c' F/ e! \<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
5 G# S* f+ @9 m5 B! s& B6 G: x<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
* O! t* D' G; P5 M, _8 D% u<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
8 I% M- U4 T! N( {1 @$ I; q<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
' e& H  {, ^: e7 y0 ~<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
3 F5 T% c4 K6 |4 C, a8 N# v. u<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

5 r1 N0 W; h- N3 d& P 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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5 f( Z& T9 T1 C" x. q# u<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>