【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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& K5 d  A+ w) b9 Q  u% }1 d6 X歌词我附在后面。
, v0 w; q9 {9 `The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
  ]7 |3 s4 g: _* Q' N( t) SThe sky is happy down to its soul
; A" C. b/ X8 D" A$ ]  fWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
1 }) u( i3 c" m1 p# R% \& tIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
9 h# e# R) W( Y: L3 KMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
- O1 v- V6 N; x( l: e- GI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
' n. G1 v9 ^; w* OCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
, p, d- t- ?1 g9 S2 yI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
% {$ P% q5 ^) k5 V; r0 b9 X/ bI regret not dying
3 O' X+ x7 i2 v; N1 A3 r, f' uI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
+ [7 Z2 `9 Z, i1 `With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
+ |2 e. S9 m" }; s8 G" M8 yIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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1 @8 a& f7 z6 h& W3 e- {$ U<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
, k& e$ g1 Y! f<P>月光闪亮 </P>
, `8 s" T4 l3 `7 y8 W<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
8 S! H# i' }# F) ~' n+ d3 S<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
- ~# X* M4 n- ?% z8 D7 _/ y( e<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
7 U! r4 n( A% i6 ?$ W4 p$ {<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
6 S  K& B! ~% I7 f9 T, G<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
. q4 T: {% c, T' R. R<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
) Y7 E- T5 `6 z. u<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
$ C/ n1 `, a& f7 u) m) Z<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
. h& c& g9 Y* \- c* Z% ]2 @<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
# ]$ v) y" y/ l2 R' i- b<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
7 T* A; F5 w& W$ R8 m3 K; @<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
: I* `/ v) T# D; U' _<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
/ \) o0 @# ^' w$ c<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
5 I' e$ {. i" C4 k& x+ X% O% Z<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
4 f7 m7 Q) x& H" O<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
4 S, c# \# c- \9 e2 F$ f: S<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
& I% x( p" K4 b, S/ f! I0 r<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
6 n- I' [/ |7 i+ [  W  l4 K<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
5 C0 h' `' f' O$ \1 F. I<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
1 h$ b* D- q: A<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
3 x9 `) J6 H9 U  I3 j<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
" q, V. c9 l2 T; i' ~: U' g6 w<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
/ A7 Y1 @7 [  K, O' p<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
4 u, o& ]" F! v$ Q<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
7 x/ U- N+ ~+ @6 E* b<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>