【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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( A8 E9 r: f+ }The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
" `. y+ o8 ~5 D* _$ lThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
& N, c. ~9 ?# n2 j9 c+ ^It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
# b; ]) o, V$ aYou needn’t fear anything
5 x0 G; ?  @& o4 Y$ JMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
& f: J: j6 X% ^" ^( B2 XEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
( `! u) K& e$ e* TI love you I love you with all my heart
6 Y; w- \4 E6 X# N) u. _; ANothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
, A. V$ ?$ J5 {. e; o, LYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
9 V. ~) h1 X# {' }I regret not dying
& k. W$ x0 Y2 B2 y) PI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
* w$ M5 M( l3 TYour speech can’t even keep up with it
7 d9 B7 O# j" S. VIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
- L) n1 N5 V! {8 lRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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5 P6 ]+ M- h" f* S! N* P<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
  ^( `# W6 }! C0 r; n<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
9 f8 D; P5 b% Y( @! e* \2 h  `# K<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
! I  o, x! W4 ~<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
0 K: o; a  b1 S% {! g7 v<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
/ A9 u2 r4 n7 k5 m; B! k$ P6 R2 x9 X3 }<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
+ G' R% n# D$ m7 k, p( ~1 u<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
" m5 ~7 R: |8 F" G) A$ t<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
# ~0 |4 _3 ~8 s5 x% k; T" h<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
* |, v% ~" t8 I& ^4 ^1 g+ C5 E9 z1 Q& c<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
4 Q5 Q5 S9 J1 r) i# T7 e! M0 q<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
5 x% ?% k4 s/ |9 G% J<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
6 K1 c7 A$ s. z" d3 ?, Y<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
3 r" p. U% k) X7 h9 f<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
& e  F. i9 I+ t6 q2 w4 I<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
5 f( J& R) v  |7 |% F' x$ ]" J<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
8 a( y6 d- v9 ]9 b4 N, R6 C<P>I regret not dying</P>
) s' n; K4 N9 T& p. C- k! v9 k<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
+ \, R7 `0 w( Z/ d2 \* v) }<P>I only have one tongue </P>
& O0 b, A0 @, x* j<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
  \/ W% k' N* |, h1 o. @  M<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
  z% V- Z$ {4 Q; R9 M" H  t<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
' |$ K) h) T0 X9 M4 `<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
% B8 P: J4 w( X/ J* e$ G<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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5 S( s' `7 _7 W* Z/ Z 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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' M9 w- H' X2 j- \% d7 U: g<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>