【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
( L2 T8 X1 j6 E  d' A2 P  _2 iThe moonlight is shining brightly,
8 i5 r8 l2 N+ ^# \0 dMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
2 `5 \! d/ b  r" ~9 c3 \" ]The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
" y3 H  G+ _& y. w7 s& S% g8 uSeeing the sky content with its love
0 ~3 f# j1 V$ v4 J" G* wIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
8 z0 l! s1 p. ]( J% S7 KMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
) a8 r: ^( f0 l, o3 RI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
' s8 j( o8 y/ C+ \0 p* ~8 q3 g' OI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
6 v# W! s% z* z1 pYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
$ O" P' [2 ]5 z  t+ C! pI regret not dying
% M( e3 `1 y$ H- Q9 w8 eI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
& L  ]1 Q9 r' ^) X6 B. MWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
$ }# X6 m) j- R8 S9 ?If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
# T7 j5 D* R4 B- u. `9 wRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

$ p- ?6 k5 s7 R4 d<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
% n# L1 ^0 S% T0 W<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
: B/ {5 f- v5 a/ ~" _<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
3 t# Z- m; T! W! e; W<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
6 v2 m1 j) {5 e, P<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
  Z$ p" R% e9 ~" u<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
; @" ]% n( v" o6 j8 V. [8 P# m<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
9 r) I  D. }( @6 W5 L" F2 ~: K<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
2 s# J0 e5 g$ Z# ]6 u<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
) c/ C. G3 u! o/ N<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
$ P5 ]6 r% A" j- D2 q<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
2 b( }1 @  i9 J% m/ {<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
, }; A% P  }' h# }. N- K<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
& Q" h2 J( ?1 P$ h<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
, p4 L; `7 x$ a  G( R6 X8 w# o<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
( ^& P( Y6 i5 D( j- \<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
9 {6 k$ |% y; s<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
4 a5 i6 \: \# J<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
/ E- E  q- j# a/ H8 o& F4 I" J<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
; h8 Y( ~: b5 K% }0 R6 a. ]<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
" r- V! J; [" P( K) [" H* z<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
" ?$ F# ]7 T" o<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
' F6 C/ n- e" T9 j* N! B! B<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
) s2 t' ^. d) f4 q* h) A3 S<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
& f1 V* T+ `9 v, S* x7 B4 w, }<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
5 {+ k  b1 \/ n6 q' h8 }<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
0 O( [; T  W% a6 f<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
7 c1 M; p) R) `3 Z5 w3 v/ s4 j<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
, Z4 p) ^4 F. u6 J<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
/ N$ |* V8 h2 \, P<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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7 n" ]- U1 T1 q& G' m8 Z 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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! Z% x: w  l" [: \( f2 D<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>