【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
. X! ]! N% b6 Y: p, t% ?The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
  c. C: C* n0 W% k/ ySeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
  _; m. Y! {) n3 r, fYou needn’t fear anything
1 k' I5 Y: }- d% U3 ?My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
% S5 T( z8 i' REvery other word you utter is love
6 x, I2 \2 J2 v5 v1 KI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
/ n- R. p2 N+ K, W# CCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
2 e4 v- Q% R$ z6 C0 U9 b- _& z% Q+ wI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
$ y2 `1 _3 @1 I; Y' RI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
9 O. k9 U7 |) A. YWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
8 \5 h; B& `5 w4 `  W/ lIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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5 l) G! N+ x. J% I! R<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
6 E& _# g- D2 _5 O) t# n<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
- x- K; ^: b6 z3 v1 {* T<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
6 S" @( V% z7 F# P& U<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
5 A$ w7 c" [* l1 F4 K+ `' g<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
/ K8 A1 i2 j+ u6 O) |<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
, B: p7 e6 H5 a6 H( F<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
9 |! Q: ?1 j& r<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
$ a1 U% t/ N5 r. M4 Y$ \' S<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
0 k' R3 p( z9 H7 f0 E5 w<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
& m% N( }9 L3 @<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
- f, Q% @# \2 I" `6 f! }5 a<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
4 P2 i6 i% v* ~( J' k8 ]<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
. h) O3 u: j; {$ c% @. @<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
1 B$ c3 o6 I& S& }) N5 l5 W, |: O<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
. J% {/ m" G( B<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
0 N' V5 ~2 g% Q2 ~" X1 x<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
5 b$ U" u/ X7 W  e<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
1 \8 Y  t4 ~* i9 E. z<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
) g7 P0 L- D) e" u& w3 U<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
! v9 k  L& O* L% `<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
, ^" T+ k! v3 |$ g0 t<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
: }* I0 e6 _3 d<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
; D) i' {# c* _0 f<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
0 O+ v$ U2 t' C$ Z% ~<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
4 l0 |, l7 y0 [6 _5 n- {  l, O<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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; s6 a6 [% F. ~2 h/ R; G 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>