【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
$ ]* v2 v; F+ q# D3 d2 J! xThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
, V$ n1 }; u# i! X8 bThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
& E( E/ Y1 @' MYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
1 D. w( y, g6 [4 q8 g3 {Every other word you utter is love
. f' \7 ^0 G7 v; Q  h  t' ^I really want to know just how much you love me
4 ]2 I) h$ p% g7 tI love you I love you with all my heart
& R+ z0 W# n$ Q; i9 cNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
6 y4 N, V, E: L) Q7 p* l2 ]3 q; ^I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
" h: o$ J- v5 V0 fYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
9 E; Q) J6 j/ V% q& q7 q8 ~I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
5 T( \+ n2 |8 V2 ARambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

" L2 \: e' S4 G<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
0 ?* P* U1 S3 `: W' S+ \<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
0 R3 g( F; |( O% T9 g' E8 }<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
1 ^8 a+ j$ }  P# ?5 X<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
$ S, }9 z& O! ^" @  r" L<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
9 Y% ^* ?6 n1 l. P" a. Z<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
0 R$ D: C/ G1 L8 ?  c<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
: U7 R3 T7 `! U0 ~<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
6 J7 r) V+ @, x$ K" Z* n5 ^' X* \# p<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
, `2 `8 q0 R. q<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
) I" U* I' A% l1 g8 X<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
) W( y/ Z5 q' h- B7 k+ S<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
! P* F! W" A2 m$ c2 b- T<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
2 }' \2 x1 }3 s# o<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
! P( k& {, ]7 Z4 |# P1 V+ \  v<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
! T0 ?& S" M" a; a6 m<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
' {( U" |- n& R! N/ L$ J. ?<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
! K, V3 G' b( M# `3 G/ r2 Y" q<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
' d' ^0 z" K2 y! y3 ^. i2 Y! K<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
: {$ j* T0 X8 ]6 Q! c" @6 `  \<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
: A& _% c, x  D( U" Q5 x<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
2 S( v$ z2 R! ]: d3 W: _: o<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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- _2 x/ o& v8 w1 S1 H  x我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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/ Q2 y! ?; |7 G4 w9 F5 X& Z& v<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>