【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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/ j' l0 g: A, h' f7 A! L歌词我附在后面。
( E- h' W% G* L0 K% L# QThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
& G6 R' V$ X! P" A* @! jWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
3 f! n( i7 ?0 zThe sky is happy down to its soul
3 u* I5 a$ c# \+ M! |& hWith the moon kissing it every night
5 |, g8 a; [! f4 m* \4 j# c7 ~. R* l( d8 DSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
; ~( M, P: I% B1 E3 i  l3 ZI really want to know just how much you love me
0 Y/ k5 E( @+ ?: `3 }I love you I love you with all my heart
7 z- W0 g# {2 V0 a. q0 dNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
& V8 p2 P+ i) g; O1 YThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
. `) \& @1 V  FI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
, I# x; g0 j7 Q6 k. H( K* dI regret not dying
& Q* }, E' r; O: L/ z, X$ d( wI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
, V  I+ I  M; xYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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" Y% H! f  v7 ^<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
( l3 ]% i5 ]4 s, h9 k<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
8 X: D  G* [1 \( a- O<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
1 k% X2 u  ?$ n# Z! n<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
: Q  E# K8 b8 q3 ^<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
1 f$ |% _* ]7 {& }" _2 ]<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
9 o0 a# |2 X2 N  G. k: h% S4 {<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
8 a4 g8 R, [2 |5 f7 J6 i<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
7 r1 [$ ]1 b3 Y5 u! N<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
6 ?" o" ]% z. i8 N- e( G8 J% D<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
, i0 K* ?9 h9 I+ T. w<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
6 h% |/ `- s1 [7 y0 m- X<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
9 d: w/ s7 ^3 h9 v7 G" P! A<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
- r3 e2 W2 Z  d& F<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
- }0 z' u0 ?+ N<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
7 E1 g4 X% c7 |) F5 C4 x<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
% j& h" e  l8 g3 l1 m$ d% j. s9 D<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
, s* v7 B1 G$ L5 c/ G( u6 h<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
& U4 O/ D5 Z6 m" N) z; p<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
+ c  b$ l" S; s! w' T" e<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
$ R7 R4 f' Y( V<P>I regret not dying</P>
+ I$ q2 v0 q4 A5 b<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
' `% W1 N" X% N7 D<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
/ l* V4 v7 u+ F9 U, r9 v. Q<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
8 U+ v! ~4 }5 K# E<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
  e7 ?, ^/ a% O4 M, [3 k' t0 \$ ]<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
( N% @3 _% U8 N2 i3 H& Q<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
7 B- M3 k6 [/ ~<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
! C3 {% g5 K( }<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
% T" D' A" J9 T<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
* W4 `: `9 I! |6 y9 _<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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  m  v0 g0 m, E) @! j, _- o2 s( y 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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) x* x1 z+ `# q/ Z<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>