【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
: @" c  `% d$ U  x- m: q+ tThe sky is happy down to its soul
& h1 |  y; K8 L& l" M+ o% hWith the moon kissing it every night
6 k. M. E' c  p0 i& _6 QSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
1 d3 \0 J3 x+ L- t+ jMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
4 W8 R  T! t! F  l8 l6 l3 w5 zEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
% [; T/ E4 i+ T/ WI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
; E2 y" u- O/ D8 u5 a2 O; [) HCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
3 R% W9 ^* `6 @8 FI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
1 C, g3 h' L# e; N7 J+ vI regret not dying
7 @. B# N8 p; X" BI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
) |( v* A' @+ s. Z0 k2 _With such a tongue as yours,
' o; Y* A' c+ \- _) ]" W2 @  FYour speech can’t even keep up with it
8 w5 H3 q$ C( [) p( I; z0 IIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
) ?9 {' U) Y& G& E; bRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
+ N" x: g0 u) r; s" J( l<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
1 J& z$ d3 {* D4 |0 {<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
. _1 {9 x. Z: E6 V9 j" H( i<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
" Z7 ?+ G) R$ [( B<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
1 m- n3 z( a$ T5 F4 Y<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
  o4 p: M2 a; e2 R<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
* f( m- i2 G/ B<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
5 d1 L/ e- z; u9 e5 {5 |<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
7 I0 p) ?5 _1 o  n) |( Z1 x<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
8 P5 ~2 K* C; L/ t$ D9 P" v: H<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
. ]4 o; o# e" T2 @<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
$ X, v+ y7 }, x& b% o: s<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
9 Q2 d" V8 d1 U6 T$ u1 V" A<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
8 y- j; d6 @  i5 {+ F<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
' d4 L3 y  Y' M: s5 m<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
$ X2 a1 }8 R8 B0 v2 @( i7 @9 T$ R; w<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
  z) j" d) S5 u$ U6 F; @<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
9 B/ T" M8 f1 _  _<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
9 ^9 a. A. m# O( R3 w* U<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
5 N1 i2 r' ^0 t* D<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
  O1 n  H' I( `<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
% I: {# B6 q' r5 U% i! h1 D: g<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
! _6 ]+ N( u2 n- j. |. a<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
  {  O! U# \# m2 _2 x' ~+ U/ a<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
9 ]" g$ A: v; o; Y0 d8 W<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
" y8 @0 Y" I1 u+ [<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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