【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
6 {( Y' [3 u0 y$ i2 fThe moonlight is shining brightly,
2 w' S9 n7 M2 n! ?* ^5 \6 B$ a' Q0 oMaking the sky glitter like gold,
1 @5 Z0 ?& I! qWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
. f! ~9 ?& V0 X2 |The sky is happy down to its soul
; l3 X, C! B5 ~+ o( \7 ]With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
) Y: P8 b- {7 W6 kIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
. K- M, e! q) n& E4 J9 hYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
+ S/ K5 e0 S! MNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
. ~  \; w9 V1 ^* h: FI’m still filled with fear
$ ]: @- L- b. K. dYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
7 a* @2 q2 |7 }/ g, K. BI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
) u% K7 q1 L" @2 u2 E; OWith such a tongue as yours,
/ X7 c4 E- \4 x) H2 B- oYour speech can’t even keep up with it
& i) w' o" h6 p2 {  C2 W' zIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
1 v, E& ~8 S) o" C$ i. W5 wRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

3 q0 J& D6 M* p5 d5 V<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
' u8 w6 g4 K- k* W2 ~: G; ?( |<P>月光闪亮 </P>
* K8 z! ^; J+ q$ p) p) ~' S<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
: G4 P* ]- a0 G- c; C6 r<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
* c5 _' A) L# W7 t( _<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
1 {: K! F* y0 H<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
' W7 [& d3 a! d- s& r) m4 [( ?<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
( Q9 d$ R7 {& z1 I- {, l<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
, D, z' I( k4 P2 y9 Z<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
! N) C6 G) h1 G3 ]' W" T- n<P>你无需担心</P>
4 a, M7 B9 |7 \0 w0 O% F<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
% {( A) \0 [8 S/ _<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
; @* F! t! \& j) {$ z<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
* D' ^' M2 J" p# S) F/ p! a3 U<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
8 G" K* _9 d+ w* d9 N1 z$ b<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
* N' F9 @$ a( u6 i<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
1 l  ~% l8 P# H<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
# _; O, g1 Y+ `  W4 k<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
! _# \, a. L! r9 g/ H8 @# H<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
' `; c, b; k" ]4 ?# ~( [; p, W4 K<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
7 P9 l% i9 }. y% D* p5 \" E- Z! N<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
+ J; t$ L6 Q" J: b<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
1 m- T* g! g7 e5 t<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
% Z& c" G" z' \" ~) V) K9 N' q<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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* U* e3 |7 ]" G0 m- `<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>