【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
9 K, D% I& Z! I; n7 J7 KThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
! e" ~+ M) n6 \' e8 uSeeing the sky content with its love
& o1 _3 r# h% J' {( FIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
& ^, i1 Z( A# H# \2 H% lEvery other word you utter is love
/ e# k$ P8 M! O/ [4 W9 d; O! qI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
& l6 E* t9 Y# ]6 A. QNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
8 h% u$ f7 q8 k7 G: o# q( ^I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
5 i. `0 t, d' f/ ]) C- w% q4 ZI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
1 U, n6 p6 i2 Y- @0 i* ZI regret not dying
; {/ L7 c( B8 d5 u) WI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
( e2 W& k, K) \1 r- b! s. z<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
8 f( A1 W' v1 z. l3 W) [3 f<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
" r6 ^0 d4 d# U4 z, m<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
! y- G, q$ H  D8 E9 P<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
4 v+ b" E- _- X<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
) j. c( T6 {' _<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
& V8 [! g+ o: v2 M1 `# V& m<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
0 H/ |( Z: h1 B3 v- N/ O& }" Z<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
# \  B1 l# }0 G<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
, _% c8 f% D2 O  E; r7 k<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
1 \8 ^: ~8 n6 G<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
+ ]) X2 D0 T, C# M' y4 A( K8 O3 M<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
7 i; E4 T& F4 y# A) X  K<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
& w/ ?5 o( u4 ?  T4 ~( g/ b) n<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
" @$ p1 a) k+ b* @8 j! ]# H<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
1 \3 s2 s$ l8 h( {  q( v<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
" r. d. @* \" I" C/ y0 I* A<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
8 z& j) M" D7 M! y<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
* w/ Y' B# F6 D<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
, x' q- Q. P! _- Q& y  j<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
) X. _, G6 g' y6 r<P>I regret not dying</P>
2 D% X0 A9 I  t3 j/ p<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
& t1 I- w8 q' r. ^<P>I only have one tongue </P>
* O, E8 h4 Y- ^$ L<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
2 I6 f# Z; u* m+ ?$ c<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
7 L; _6 S7 W* N8 r5 c: S0 _2 t  v<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
5 J- O+ f! h! ~$ G( N<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
, s1 Z/ Z8 h% b+ G0 A, l<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

$ x% |; M4 J  ]# _; n" U$ j* O. P我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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' F* _! y+ E% y$ P! |5 G/ X# q<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>