【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
/ X4 ~2 d" q) M2 \Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
! Q6 m( |, ?8 Z7 u7 s$ [The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
6 n* T* j" z4 d: D$ MThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
) ~$ H0 h& R- ]4 k" r2 _Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
* M; s! e% B7 y9 V1 L& Z2 nYou needn’t fear anything
6 N2 l) z1 B/ |) |, zMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
% c* Z! w) f* W/ m3 {; }  a8 B7 nI love you I love you with all my heart
2 B, M2 v0 D& G, \) `- ]Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
5 ~9 ^, |% w, Q/ lI want so much to see inside your heart
. X$ @0 V' \; M6 u/ zI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
* b. A. b! ^8 f" \9 a; A% zYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
2 k, u4 c( b% T: NYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
8 S  Z! L4 W9 ]8 KRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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, |% w5 ~# A& q0 B! l; j" H. O$ m/ O<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
: Y3 L- W6 D# ]3 r<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
/ h2 b, I! u1 C# N8 S<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
; C1 C7 Y( V4 ]7 X; y6 v! y<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
) e$ g+ d4 `: n5 s7 n2 a( J1 G" ]# y<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
$ N/ }- N$ z  s0 G( J4 n- d" d<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
' Q+ x7 ~% X6 X. E<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
7 B; M4 k" b) t! Z  Y<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
- T: a% x4 L  A4 |7 P<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
. a. [# u5 I# P<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
% q. m' c& z( M" Q7 f4 V% J) ^<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
7 V7 K3 I) _0 l! I& ~. ~; [<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
  Z1 d& H4 A2 K$ z<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
( L# K& `5 U* i0 @/ f; Y6 L<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
: G' H( Y9 l# C( H* Y9 [% u<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
0 U6 n; a/ \1 o0 y2 I<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
' d2 ?. G1 ~/ C9 X4 f2 @<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
2 M  g* `; ?$ h6 l# ?* R<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
2 E: a+ y: c2 O, C. F/ j# H8 }& G<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
: c) i$ r1 t; r& B) w<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
, U5 v! ~  i* o3 b<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
! p% k& M  Q- e, Q3 Y<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
8 I4 B  ^- Z* n0 {0 p/ G& k) v<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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0 o+ g% @  |+ u2 F# x. Z* R<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>