【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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6 j- W" Q& M' o& n; o/ ?( x9 i歌词我附在后面。
/ r( ^6 x- i  z" K9 Y% X& O# f( ]The moonlight is shining brightly,
$ E  [4 z1 T( h7 `) j8 D( dMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
5 I4 i7 k/ A! J; D& K! ?The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
: \. V, ^: i/ ]9 l% o) `5 U1 h9 p) PIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
3 I$ B( l* x) s2 J- WYou needn’t fear anything
' ?$ z9 P* u! N2 K. Y- W: K% F5 T9 zMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
6 v: D' |/ L$ _2 ~I love you I love you with all my heart
* W, _2 @, s% S+ YNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
) S7 X3 l# I' u3 c: PI want so much to see inside your heart
; w6 A4 u% [+ n8 o$ o; Y% GI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
) @3 m( g+ ?( g, V8 a$ j5 K8 GI’m still filled with fear
3 {& F$ P5 K8 f* _0 D6 zYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
& D) m, P" J6 u. HI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
. k, I0 u9 O# U5 D, l( TYour speech can’t even keep up with it
  x& X+ C7 q  {( b9 I- oIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
2 n/ i, s5 R' F* j1 y0 h% ?; [<P>月光闪亮 </P>
( |( a  u1 v" {$ j) I9 D( l- }4 A<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
* |0 R' i- o4 o8 L4 e& o: X8 o3 n<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
7 Z/ D4 f/ ~) a# |: k1 x& P1 y7 V4 T<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
0 q. h) J& g- W5 g$ Z<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
3 H- Q- }- l8 g) M<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
9 K; K! m, v6 ?4 ~) ^8 r$ p<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
0 x1 v: w5 h  e3 ^- L5 h4 A<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
$ T7 o- h, z8 h# R5 d<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
' H% T$ ?: F* u" V% C$ D5 G. B: `4 @& y<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
7 d7 x; P# p# I<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
3 ]7 J4 p3 E+ ?/ m% T; u% V<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
5 e6 E% R* I+ |9 r7 z1 [: B# j" \<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
; s& c2 c. N0 k! e<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
3 E: |* U$ s" Y9 C0 K8 a+ B' p& b<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
* U) ]. e  ^; v8 N<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
1 T1 c' u2 K& |- d<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
4 ?, o/ E  A$ h$ J; k& Z1 I<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
% H; \9 ^4 `8 m2 ], O0 m4 a<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
& T  a" H3 s9 k% I8 s3 t& @0 P<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
( q; l: z) e0 B$ j( Z<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
" i) Q* N/ D7 M* }* y9 y6 i  U<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
- p- s: J$ S1 [2 d$ F8 ^( N- G<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
: P5 Q* z1 y* I( m* d% V. O<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
8 F' o" X/ C! z: e<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
8 P3 F2 G) i: [3 {. \  @8 ]<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
* g3 S1 j) V, `6 c7 q<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
# `. W7 v' S! d! [* b<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
' d) V4 g/ N0 J; ~: u! q0 l<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

, o; c" o+ ?% z! j我请你剖开它

- j. n' W) B0 v! a# I/ e 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>