【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
+ q; Z9 ]! }4 i1 P+ L. TThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
" W' D! H8 x7 {" D% NFrom the first moment we met,
( F2 A% |, w5 D/ I0 sI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
( C: p5 w& u0 ?9 zBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
& e. {  x( ^+ |5 O+ I2 X* C% cI would probably know how you feel
( Y' j/ g2 T+ O% KLove… just the word love
( p- I# c$ y6 GWhy is it so difficult to express?
! y& o1 z7 z( t$ h9 m4 Z6 }I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
: P2 E2 q5 z: i& R* Y) {I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
/ _7 M2 W* a' B) D, OEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
# ]% x- Y5 m2 M1 k5 Z# I) ZWhy is it so difficult to express?
1 o) i: O2 S* O7 X$ zI want to confess that I love you,
8 T) m/ F/ d, ]) g4 ^But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
9 z% D$ v( s6 Q  yEntrust my love within your heart
6 J& [0 \3 t7 \9 I- ZCan I entrust it to you?
: I8 t1 W! @% ^Entrust my love within your heart

' S+ l: x! O/ s% E5 U- e[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
6 _) k0 c  k8 V4 u7 v; g' _  @<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
- h+ @* m* b7 Q, `- b7 k# g0 c<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
0 a$ ?& e* i  _! N<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
5 ^+ ^, F& o& u, z/ X7 M<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
5 e$ c) N0 }, _! k2 B<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
5 n9 j0 W% {. b<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
, y5 ^/ T! T5 v<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
6 J4 s+ d- C1 m: M* K<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
( i0 I% o' M9 Y3 ]9 m: O<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
$ \; N! r" S& O1 v- s<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
) D! @- Z" n, v: o3 \<P>但我不会</P>
0 s# W6 @# u" ?8 d  Q& \9 r" s& Y<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
( i1 O$ }# g0 V8 D<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
3 m8 W0 e" s$ P6 P# l<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
3 Y/ [+ P% l* U, w7 ]( Q& L<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
) ?$ m; @3 [4 U) o4 E% b<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
* o& D% a1 ?4 h3 m3 M<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
. P" V; p) o# x* d<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
7 @# s8 t8 N' J, `8 Y% [. f2 {<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
8 ]* b/ |" {* N! M" X" H  D2 t<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
" y% q; j8 L* O: [0 {/ Q<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
7 D( T+ Y% H; h- ^+ H. l5 m; i<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
4 Q5 Y& i) v: ]. L5 ]<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
! s+ l8 B7 R, t9 z+ @2 h* I<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
$ Q) l8 D7 j- P  J" }2 n) L<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
$ F" ^6 f: {7 H! K4 H# E2 |( Q<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
' B3 _" G/ w; e. r5 f! D7 i<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
; }5 j( Q7 p  e<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

1 i0 [( q: ^' s, C) W7 N: P 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

4 o* o7 P9 L8 O, G% Y. ~2 |+ j这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

* ?( n( Z  e  R! A# M$ i: S7 r这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>