【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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: l3 F  B) v' G* B6 V3 `  u. v% h) k我另将歌词附在此。
) X6 I. E  f: gThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
; E) \4 I: y3 }& l% a8 E2 EFrom the first moment we met,
9 O2 w& y; C1 {: [6 y  a' `$ II already loved you with all my heart
8 V, `' R4 T- h8 a5 l) I! LWe meet and talk everyday,
5 b% ?. }7 I  |/ Q6 V  M, I; ~But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
+ S( d& j) ~. C0 G! N# d5 sLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
$ O) H% u- ^; k- KBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
" n8 ?& ]7 A% J+ u* m2 O% Z) sIf today isn’t too late,
' [0 W$ Q4 S/ f7 gI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
% x" |- Q" ^7 f. d+ I, RI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
# j9 e% U8 P4 i. g, Z' A% rOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
: Y6 B/ w% l6 b' {6 kIf today isn’t too late,
4 _0 z) O' Q! xI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
# P6 H* ~- A3 k! l! fI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
1 e" F3 _& L9 L) z. K# tCan I entrust it to you?
9 V& ^+ q, L4 N" uEntrust my love within your heart
, ?0 w2 n4 L" bCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
7 |  _$ L' ^+ M3 q: R' `<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
+ R( X% \# Q; V. [  q, q8 Q<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
' T; ]$ ^3 N9 H! t& p/ u<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
. A8 a/ k" r) P<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
$ x' t: N/ g7 C4 O<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
5 q4 I5 `$ N& W; W<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
" Y& x& A3 c6 P8 |: w" R+ p$ v<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
( ~* |! r' d# S8 w<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
7 q0 \* q7 J4 I9 T3 m) h5 J<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
4 F# T5 C* g! Y+ E, g<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
9 M& F& G' I1 _. A<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
  ?. K2 l; P+ d: Y<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
: H+ x9 E: [( C, F, }( M<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
# {$ ^( z+ _( i, L<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
8 I" E, A) _- y" W' {5 U0 F<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
1 ^) N8 Y) I, a: e<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
& P6 j7 v$ |- l<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
4 K0 n, I5 I* L4 J7 X<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
+ r& k; x. a: `/ A2 Y3 k  P0 p6 q<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
* \  E( p. y4 r! l5 g; h<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
" U" b4 D7 D! i1 C<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
6 o( G' z0 K) k/ _<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
$ P  ^  S: S8 c/ W. W8 o. m<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
; M6 C3 G, i" \) }( E<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
& D' Y! D) V) S  E( ]" {1 |<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
( L& z: t0 T/ ]" s0 `: L* i<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
9 X& I8 Y. n3 X5 Q  f<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
0 T! w6 a$ k5 G2 @<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
( c+ S" o4 B2 C3 x. R<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

6 |/ ?0 h! N+ V/ s 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

' z! o! J6 I5 G* Y: T1 x这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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1 V0 u6 Y* s( o: g; M; N' T<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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( f8 Q' V7 p5 s& v<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>