【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
" A; d% l# C# m. XFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
% c$ N) H9 Z4 d' b+ }8 eWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
( n" V" D$ _$ \6 e) ^) HIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
$ M/ i( i+ D$ G5 [4 k/ {1 @Love… just the word love
; K, Y! E+ i9 }) RWhy is it so difficult to express?
4 F# ]4 F" n% H/ t& F, F' B) r( J3 vI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
0 ^; W# b5 B9 TI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
* ^& ?8 n5 C9 H3 N1 e# O9 _5 d% DCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
- O2 @) e" m5 d) i* X4 xWhy is it so difficult to express?
3 J, }5 d2 X. kI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
/ b) p  W5 y0 J9 w  ~' d7 \* M) tOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
$ E) {- ~; D  R' k  [3 Q% @If today isn’t too late,
: T* M. V! z8 N- UI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
3 J  l( Z2 R% z9 s) u% @% jCan I entrust it to you?
4 s9 ^- V+ c( r- BEntrust my love within your heart

* }6 q; J8 y. @/ K[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
1 h& Q/ c! h2 x2 S. K' |2 u<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
  {$ v5 A1 k  _( N" ]1 Y2 j. l<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
+ {0 P) ?- @: s" q" M<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
& c8 ~; \# L8 O# q" }6 r<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
( k9 H# _0 }: A% m7 z1 @( ]! y<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
: h$ N. B( J6 i: {4 }/ h<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
* t/ ~; h) \/ J# t* k; O" L<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
) p4 w/ s9 {: a2 o2 [# c<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
6 D0 ?1 M" C& j4 C; t. y<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
9 I2 [5 L: b1 _7 c<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
! X5 N4 A- R6 G* i3 C  m<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
. o% E% g9 f( J# ]<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
6 T$ A4 m. ]& l, Q' U! i- Y<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
9 f7 z5 q- ^6 s5 v8 u" L4 \3 h& D" J<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
% _: d$ _  I) P8 ~/ ?<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
8 R8 v( }. T4 ?% b6 ^3 V0 ^<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
; U) a- O6 N9 F; U" k8 I<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
4 i2 [3 P9 Y  P9 V1 }2 ?" J, }9 m/ E. y" z<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
/ ~; I6 y$ ]) k! g* w9 p/ r2 l<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
- O0 W+ L( U" g<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
7 [" a* U( E$ B$ ?, f' E: W  h<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
" _9 Y1 g4 {" r/ g/ @- @<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

, u5 h7 g* I& _: I; ~这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>