【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
0 S' d& @. b4 O; D  F! }- B. MThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
" m1 u, U  k4 PI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
( P) {' ]7 n8 M. k$ @' A$ B; XWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
1 H& c& s. ^+ DBut I never did
2 y* l) Y) t9 }- W) T$ HOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
/ I& o* W) V+ X4 jIf today isn’t too late,
0 k8 w4 N, @6 j$ u3 X2 x5 l9 JI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
7 [+ p0 G( @3 VI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
' K1 e2 }4 g6 l2 Z% qLove… just the word love
' x8 \2 E  E( R4 A, \& V5 r/ ]9 ?  M  fWhy is it so difficult to express?
. `( F/ q2 S% n& v7 qI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
5 q1 d' m6 t6 K, [3 A$ YIf today isn’t too late,
3 b6 T3 L* @- L+ Q! d5 FI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
" i* {) c4 B7 t+ HI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
& \$ Q* Y3 r) ]9 |Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
7 C. |0 L" A( e* g( E4 ZEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
6 O5 |& X. q" E8 Q' B<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
8 {5 a8 c6 Y* D" E<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
- {; v% z! D. B' |<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
& h, m) a, K; T, F% V<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
+ m" L+ a5 i9 F/ y2 `<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
3 U! O+ _7 p" `/ b  U  p- k<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
7 @! E! i5 Z$ E<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
2 F  w# T1 A2 g; o<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
  l3 L) C! E9 H% d! D. h0 Y5 O<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
5 V/ Q% n4 Y: r% k<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
: n- M: A2 _3 c# S7 J<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
4 g. z# S0 [5 O6 y( Q- h, A<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
  N5 ~9 r, g. w( @  @  S<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
: s. ^  _' x: \- y<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
8 g  l" d6 x  V( o/ z  C<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
; O& a) P$ b% ]; V3 s* S<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
2 J" w0 P* b$ i8 D<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
- f% E0 f$ s# _<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
& m4 X; d5 B/ h, X/ e<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
$ |& [& ?, f- b5 [<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
# c: k! S. Q' d; j<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
( J/ x7 {9 e$ l<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
) i% m2 h7 W/ B6 h, e2 B<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
7 L7 f* R% P& w<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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: X/ e# S  l: ~0 o; \+ m! p# @<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>