【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
8 q$ X/ ^) z: ~* w+ p, j; `From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
& b) ], Q) _  V8 CBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
1 c4 p; g9 R6 ?% K& `If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
0 U1 X  x; G/ Q' _# nWhy is it so difficult to express?
, n; |$ ]( ?4 g. y; H( uI want to confess that I love you,
8 q6 R. q: z+ Q1 N* W: _+ mBut I never did
+ A: i+ r, d0 l2 YOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
3 H; |# P5 p: i! x( L. fIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
; I6 O- h' p$ X5 GI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
' ?4 T3 G/ s( H) {" eCan I entrust it to you?
# r6 }/ h& y1 GEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
( K% k! u% S+ p! ]1 `  a3 eWhy is it so difficult to express?
1 V$ U2 w" @+ c9 a) u- Q: vI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
4 _7 p% J7 D5 L4 Z+ l% NI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
# @! V' D. M  I8 T6 I, P$ iEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
% V, c  L7 j+ _- T8 x# u, V<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
6 y* Y) Y4 W4 V" O6 E<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
' x4 U3 ]6 f' {- Y7 \<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
' [+ W/ ~) H+ ^" [1 k<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
4 c* r4 U$ N3 E& R; ^<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
0 o; M  P( P' w2 H  v$ O. C' }<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
7 d) l9 U& y! d3 d& J<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
( U" G8 Y4 }8 t6 G% [( b- |<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
5 G! ~/ l. ]( |! k0 i9 V- Z<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
3 V7 A% n# e5 G* {3 x3 |) N, C<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
' }) s; m* n1 Z5 u& z# Q<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
! Y8 U2 p' l1 E0 W" J2 `% W6 j<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
" j0 l; I4 a1 C6 W, Q  L<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
8 D) Z9 V- M0 @5 G& o; Y& `9 ^<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
% a  G! L; f2 T* K6 M<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
% H, e6 d1 U- u. H<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
( G3 Z' N- p. H0 f; `% f5 P<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
  t) m, o% c9 U1 D8 v" A7 }<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
' ?# u: a* n) f2 M9 k<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
) z5 R7 T  `# e<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
9 ]+ c6 F( C' @$ f5 \: u<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
3 Q0 B2 b" ]8 [<P>But I never did </P>
3 z* c4 `( t& x- i<P>但我不会 </P>
4 P  a% f! R) E  |<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
4 Q: C' C7 P  x2 M, }0 y7 N+ }  ]5 Z<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
/ l. G9 N/ Q+ w<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
( J/ @3 g" e# i8 @* I/ b' M<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
, I  U/ Y: p/ b<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
2 Y! R# k0 d/ V4 |1 R3 _<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
* u. z" d$ H5 z9 S; U( a. H& n1 w% W<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
8 p" G+ ?8 Q5 q" F$ J<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

$ Q- i0 w, {' o1 C" b0 _这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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8 b. c) S! \9 D- _' V0 L<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>