【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
+ G6 [% V% a2 f( S, a& B4 oBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
7 o! w( U2 m0 Z8 A* eI would probably know how you feel
* W8 c0 ]8 c. V; yLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
: N# P8 [; `* k1 X- TBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
. Z# I0 M( x" B/ X+ c) LIf today isn’t too late,
7 G8 c6 h) Z) O4 ~I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
$ B' s6 }" C7 L3 y- v- @Why is it so difficult to express?
% ?8 ~' y) K$ C/ M6 ~6 O' `I want to confess that I love you,
5 r( w3 T& \% v6 ZBut I never did
! L! ?0 O' `0 hOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
+ M3 H/ G. O' o3 z" Q5 oIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
; D4 a; x0 r% w9 E" l# L: tEntrust my love within your heart
, a9 b" A& B- R/ {% zCan I entrust it to you?
' T& L% w$ @3 j' G% |/ l9 {0 ?Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
% ?/ Y2 |2 Z2 F  t<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
7 G1 v% j( c' A% p; D+ |<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
2 i' K3 z" V& o0 e* k<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
+ s. n9 I, ]! D4 t& Z<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
) E: E  t( i, S2 m. J' O& o<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
! W# X  |- \7 j: @<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
- S8 J- F1 [5 u<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
4 n7 Y, G! `4 k( T<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
- g# U# E* N. o3 F% L<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
  p/ _: N% D" r, ~, p<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
4 [/ B9 p5 r1 D9 |: C<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
" {" q! Q; u5 R! ^<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
  M: Z% \7 r( W) W<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
/ r  }3 M' y) f4 l! |1 Q<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
9 C9 A' v6 s6 s0 j5 X& G7 v1 N<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
2 H, ^4 k6 J1 q3 @, S<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
  _% E. Z3 y* }& v7 }<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
8 m0 q9 f: |: Q1 ~% t- b+ j) ]& j1 o6 Z<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
7 b0 E, r7 ~- }5 }! d0 L$ f2 j<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
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<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
: G2 A+ j+ d" ]: I6 v/ `<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
1 p6 r1 s/ T% X; y<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
2 y# z$ D! v- J/ w4 U<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
* V5 R! Q* K5 f4 c9 a3 Z! i<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

8 f7 F! z0 O" k6 N. A 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

( r" t7 X/ H7 M" r这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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% T' P1 B3 y: m5 Z3 w- i<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>