【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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# s% y5 W1 P4 F  D我另将歌词附在此。
7 L1 O/ ]& o: d5 {1 CThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
( N9 P6 u. ^4 Q0 H7 ZFrom the first moment we met,
, V$ m: w6 ?+ q' x7 m* ^I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
/ Q% x; ^6 J. W! z2 UWhy is it so difficult to express?
2 c+ ?, W0 Y; G) h. q, oI want to confess that I love you,
" N' D# \7 F! yBut I never did
" e2 g8 A! D+ e% X5 BOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
' I/ E$ O% u& F: h6 m! U, fIf today isn’t too late,
& F8 \$ g  P& t; {, L) QI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
! H+ G0 C# w0 ^6 _/ s+ q+ K# V9 gCan I entrust it to you?
4 q* _1 e" @9 ]! B3 q5 ?1 C: eEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
6 Q, r. n3 G  z% e8 bWhy is it so difficult to express?
" x7 v1 z7 u; x& ^. n* m) k! UI want to confess that I love you,
% d& `7 o4 h" LBut I never did
; ~7 t" r+ ]& g: \+ j6 C8 ~# m- J; q( @: DOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
! p) N4 m7 r, F  DIf today isn’t too late,
/ f: t& Z- G% d7 W3 _7 w0 zI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
& }; e) l/ D2 m. P6 P* ~1 }2 GCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
3 j& ~: K  R6 t% e! U& ]; M  vCan I entrust it to you?
( l4 x& {5 r( w$ v0 k' BEntrust my love within your heart

+ F6 H/ v9 w+ {7 x[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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; U- C, M: s5 c4 K7 k  Z4 F8 Q+ ?<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
' s9 b% h! Q& k: f" F/ D<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
& L, g7 ?& t7 @" @9 M2 _" ?<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
5 e; P: Y; H+ x<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
' `6 w' ]. N4 ]) T3 K<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
7 ~4 v5 C: c3 f- u5 f" m<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
/ ^3 E) b! q/ G4 t; L  s9 i: [<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
$ h: k# [: S! h3 V6 j: e<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
( ^/ ~6 W0 J: o# M5 ~8 t<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
* T6 [; L0 N$ n: k. c: f: Y<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
5 U) c9 e# R0 l+ a' m9 u+ i<P>我想说我爱你</P>
2 |! o# l' w& J/ x& p' L# p  j<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
& c7 x8 V7 t, E$ Z1 [5 d  r<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
3 w5 m" P: j8 t8 n' Q<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
  w* m' x, n% U; V<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
- k  ^/ A3 K# B$ n6 _$ j<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
1 m+ s* a& k, H1 i6 R<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
3 z1 N% C5 P6 @* {<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
  f+ p9 j* g. F2 q, m! i$ L<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
- z- Z, z4 k3 q: x- ^3 T<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
+ f; z0 r5 H- j, E4 _8 h* p<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
& r8 Q) O2 \% I! z. v9 i  p<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
" J% L" u4 I7 @, |* o8 h; u<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
9 f  n$ ]* o5 V2 x& Z9 y) A9 }  L. }# d<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
% R: x5 G$ b0 P5 H3 I9 U) p<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
8 w# w  {, I0 j- L6 g<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
- E, m" r) w. t% E& \<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

) q; E5 _) P9 z3 X' N+ ?! e 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

( J# P0 }/ e( s0 Q9 E' A这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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% F1 j. Q1 w5 w2 S4 x7 z<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>