【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
/ E  K. h8 ^+ q& sThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
+ B/ i8 j% c4 q- oWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
+ k! p3 C6 O4 X4 }, U# QIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
8 S( U6 B% H7 XLove… just the word love
- Z! `# }1 F4 x& G; b9 J1 YWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
; s' z: g3 D) m: f6 X# F, FI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
) K8 k& ^5 H" N8 f& j; a. SCan I entrust it to you?
5 x: ?; J4 j3 r2 }$ zEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
9 H' d5 x# E* p/ j2 G7 H5 n, ]Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
0 O* E8 Z. A' H, D/ kBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
. C2 W+ |7 Z6 }/ q/ m8 H9 ZIf today isn’t too late,
$ b: M. i( d& B; Y4 R) N( MI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
: o: D7 Q1 R* ^I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
2 S3 c! k' c% d. D7 C5 X; dCan I entrust it to you?
# y' ]) o6 G" g) j" C4 G- A( BEntrust my love within your heart
. ?# H+ N- `, u/ ECan I entrust it to you?
8 R/ t( L" g+ e, N9 j! KEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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1 }8 ]. u  K& X) O# h2 L, s' M0 r<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
: u, [8 a: F$ P# C; g! f. f<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
. E+ j1 v& [: {3 q( h<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
" p3 w4 S* x' M: `: t8 z9 r8 k7 @<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
# K" @/ t9 Z# x: z& ]. P$ M  X- V, x& @<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
) K9 [/ M# V" G$ a<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
# O/ R7 `- Y/ [<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
+ o5 D0 B) u, a6 k# k8 Y+ J6 s<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
% t  x! ~3 D/ ?# b1 G<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
# t8 N! o1 V' P6 W, c<P>我想说我爱你</P>
  ?: ]* _) _: d7 M& I<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
( K9 k$ L' h' i& W, h: {<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
; P. Z) P. E; t; o# Z  g3 P<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
0 _6 l. B& p, `, C  H% E; \9 @8 O<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
# K8 _- O3 y: b# j9 r/ B9 p) [<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
' e' F; W# J- f<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
' B' y5 }+ R) R( Z) H5 w<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
; [. M. _' a1 g5 z3 |& t& @<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
2 V$ i  c4 u# I5 a<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
* o5 H8 D& X6 ?<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
5 E; Q9 I$ E3 \- h<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
# D+ p/ L4 K7 r- t$ G0 L<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
7 @  h8 J3 G- O& J<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
1 i4 [" _4 U2 I) i8 N, E7 W<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
# z* {2 y" H4 U& F<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
2 a" E8 S# }0 ]" B<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
( T; G/ U# v  q7 p<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
1 G6 [0 F& b8 k8 O! {  D3 n<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

' r# d; ]" R! Q% l- G4 s 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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# M9 a4 v3 E& v. }, f: p3 G<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>