【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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* k  ~9 K' r) w我另将歌词附在此。
' p# I; T% @5 X. n, k" \' NThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
( t& D7 e) S% e3 O4 y- j' G5 ZFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
3 Q6 u8 w- L1 d; ]5 l. sBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
3 B3 x' C( T0 ?: R8 z" _! k( P% ~2 SIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
+ [6 B( f! r4 hI would probably know how you feel
5 P) g* s! R# k/ i4 XLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
! Y& T5 q" h+ m* xI want to confess that I love you,
1 `! K, z& p3 N* hBut I never did
) C* M& p- `7 ?' h* W( WOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
& R! [) w- r. V8 o0 OIf today isn’t too late,
) D8 y. G4 K& j$ i% w2 @" `  }I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
' N. t) M6 k. k# g. q/ u3 {Can I entrust it to you?
9 W4 v0 w$ H5 |" o, t9 N% T, I4 Q5 bEntrust my love within your heart
5 k! J( s% d! m: `2 c2 vLove… just the word love
  B, [! v' z1 J9 {! lWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
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One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
3 {: m. r+ D5 Y" e0 e: \7 J. AI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
- A( p! t  f5 @+ A2 _* hCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
+ w" s. h/ x$ A2 b6 [3 J1 ^: PEntrust my love within your heart

- E1 H+ ?; p. W8 N3 A7 x[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

5 e8 N0 Z; S' P' t<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
+ m% {! m+ G) s& ?! Q% X, D<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
0 E: U9 D& C$ l' g9 F<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
1 x  _7 \5 g9 P# s. q4 }0 A<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
- s4 ^6 ]: i$ |+ T3 w8 h- S' J<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
4 A9 c5 h9 P) f( u4 i  l& U<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
' s; y* A; W6 x$ H<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
) ?! \6 L0 s" `+ X7 v<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
# x/ D8 k& c' @: y$ ~<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
( V  Y  G, Y" W9 Q% H<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
1 P4 w8 {$ M" V" k+ A4 V0 [<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
& C  l6 i3 @2 U<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
" r& Z- H; [) M( D) d! P+ z<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
! T6 a" p- P- L2 g! v+ S<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
0 g( }! p3 P( V% i<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
* `( F! I8 X* G3 q) c' M9 p<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
2 H: z* ?! A$ D<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
# A' S2 R* B' E! [7 t8 l4 L<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
) x+ T/ ]9 V* a6 Q0 [<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
9 U+ x) _5 W* e7 h( D: P<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
0 w% q" {3 @5 U$ D<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
) {+ H7 K. N2 v# d<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
  `$ {+ X2 r3 u9 P<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
; [2 R, J1 E" Y4 N4 `' R<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
, h: f/ m, B$ v. j2 i$ I<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
3 }! `5 E. m7 Z: U6 I. A<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
2 L: f+ ?" w5 X6 J<P>But I never did </P>
7 f( W4 o  k! Q$ q( i5 b! Q0 G<P>但我不会 </P>
, _$ Q" G5 r+ J3 D6 P5 t1 J4 ^) Z<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
0 P3 t# }8 `% q6 l; V<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
! h: q  r' C- Y3 r% G<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
( B* x% D8 F7 ~4 g<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
2 k' w7 S! a* V2 d8 P' ?$ T<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
9 w* X3 C+ t' e# j, o! D<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
# A9 [3 m5 A8 B<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

% M" i8 k+ O% ?6 o7 [; M 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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! W$ U' q& K0 X: }<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>