【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
' p4 _, _* f9 QThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
5 A# B7 }+ E9 ]# @: ZFrom the first moment we met,
2 h) z1 P3 z6 u% Q1 E7 k( L4 x9 _I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
, I. V8 ?  m. p6 W3 HBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
, [% |8 \3 r4 E/ z0 vLove… just the word love
8 S3 ~/ P1 ^. w5 JWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
7 f) a# y6 Z- b- b: D/ y, iOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
6 e  Y9 w% j$ o1 zIf today isn’t too late,
% |5 |1 d9 U6 ^# c3 r7 N) RI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
3 C1 s. }+ F$ ~- w5 q7 k# p7 p3 DI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
3 Z8 T$ u7 y4 |Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
; _" l6 |4 h) T! f9 t. G! LI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
! P  `) T+ k6 J6 b5 W0 `One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
+ C( }. ^1 C7 J* {I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
: F# m5 a! o3 O; a$ JCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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5 c4 S" a, k& c8 f; _$ j% G[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
, X' z3 ^1 d$ j8 Q7 o* L<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
5 Q9 Q+ p8 b3 \<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
7 G. l( v0 j8 i<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
1 E, _; ~$ i. g8 g7 j8 @/ H<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
- X5 L) n( h- v1 Q! [<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
1 b8 b3 Y9 V- b, d9 t) Q4 F- r. H<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
) C/ q/ {. E1 X! V7 E! }<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
2 v8 m; O8 p; f" `7 Q; n<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
3 m7 V) b6 y% o# T$ y$ O<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
4 X  j+ b$ Y( h<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
2 C3 h6 p2 M. H$ N; R<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
6 i% `( K4 ]1 z<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
+ c5 `8 S* \6 w) h<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
1 O! T, J& V4 F# Y5 c/ K, K<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
4 d: u/ _! Q5 \3 k<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
8 f7 g1 a- O, j' P8 Z/ g3 P" @5 K' x<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
2 g- W2 L' V" ]$ Q. t( h6 K5 j<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
' E2 n0 X3 e. v3 H0 B& `<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
) N# h5 i6 [6 H2 X" N<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
8 J6 _6 w+ |/ U9 k* T; ?/ U<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
# h6 N2 B" f7 o<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
; P2 I# ^  R8 P3 r9 M* ~* f<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
2 p8 `. W, A! c- `9 u& j8 M<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
5 k# b$ s, L. J& G! d<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
5 G9 T7 e4 s* o9 I<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
& n) H2 |! m8 f0 ~5 J) N, e<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
7 ^  H$ g2 E! T( `; u+ `  Z<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
% j3 S$ W8 q, P<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
; t  P8 B3 e+ W& H2 j6 K6 f<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
; B' s( h. T8 |$ H<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
% d$ w6 ?* z, o6 d0 S<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
( j1 A" K2 L4 ]' @) b& N! E<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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6 x4 w- C% r( w4 I+ A. Y 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

/ Y0 n7 T8 M4 d0 s" Y( s这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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0 \% Q3 h+ i% z% n0 D<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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7 ]( q& g6 J3 ^1 n  o0 w<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>