【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
2 @5 v0 O6 s6 _7 z, {& {1 N; ZThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
: n8 @8 X3 |) o( e7 AThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
( A. o/ u* |* h% n0 c4 `6 ~Seeing the sky content with its love
0 p/ h) H+ f6 h6 oIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
8 W' d, B. n4 E( B) RI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
3 i% |+ b4 M- Z, Z' y' rI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
  ]) I  ]' ]  Z, r7 T5 i; o2 eI regret not dying
# r4 G0 _0 q* j; ]I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
6 L; B% ?1 P$ |# f: N5 `( g6 `+ {With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
% e7 D& b7 k, g! Y3 @: Q+ Q7 z1 @& N% PIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
! X* S' o( p8 t' k- R+ l1 `" k  |<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
. x: H. v  F3 _8 V<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
- p0 g1 w* f$ ], ?7 k7 d<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
* j* |" x4 D8 F3 Q* Y<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
* i$ t$ D8 K2 }/ G% Q1 }  y<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
  p- |2 ~$ }" j; n: ?+ x<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
1 i8 ?# r9 P* b: _) x<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
# J  w3 q* R* d) n0 N: C<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
7 A5 i; L# K' a7 Z<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
; m/ _1 R$ ^  |# T7 C<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
7 ?0 y& ^1 M- J<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
& F" d: k% R9 n* ^4 [<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
2 I) m5 j+ K# n$ u9 e; T<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
  o, j& b6 K! h6 }! u6 K$ l" ?<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
! ~! p! n" v6 ^<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
" x( q" v8 M: h( I* ]" H# i<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
' ~3 e( F9 G7 Y2 T, y7 B- ^<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
( Z. \- Q0 {) E: S<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
5 h. E" q& E) _9 Y<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
" q% v1 B. n0 P9 Q! u7 l<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
, J7 M. A9 S( r& G" F% t1 e<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
" i. x# \$ `8 ~% ]2 ?' ^- h8 K8 M" g<P>I only have one tongue </P>
& c' |$ @9 s  }+ H3 P<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
: l% m4 X$ O6 D. u+ @; ^; h<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
3 d% ?: ?/ m9 a" n<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
0 H, w' K8 k$ ^2 o<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
9 G) R" ?8 T, @! p<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
; D8 G& Q8 W0 f* L# o' H<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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9 {, q) E$ F6 i3 e2 |7 E, n 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>