【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
" }" F6 |% a1 `8 n7 YThe moonlight is shining brightly,
. P# L# e- F& }Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
$ X6 U9 {1 d+ S' J0 gThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
# L4 v; a4 r( S* RWith the moon kissing it every night
" H6 N7 g0 b$ p! U# Y, V0 G' DSeeing the sky content with its love
- D; X6 S1 O! N8 S8 B  ZIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
" Z# l2 B- m+ }- qEvery other word you utter is love
) l8 |$ M* c; g. e* {( DI really want to know just how much you love me
* _# x; Y/ X- b& cI love you I love you with all my heart
) p; q  V$ F  G9 }* d$ b1 xNothing can compare to my love
. @$ @5 K; d) x2 _Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
9 \# a- @3 K. W- D+ M1 M+ `The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
, b) g( K) D2 n5 p" w0 _' oI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
0 Z# n. N% A+ F+ dI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
4 r4 P) \  h- r% L* ZI regret not dying
' [. ^" w" o3 ]& J+ v+ x$ h" yI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
8 A" q( q/ _7 Y. I! d) `Your speech can’t even keep up with it
7 Y% t7 C/ ?1 ?! Y6 p3 ^; b. o6 R- vIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
. _* ~7 W6 d. ~  U" j7 C' B+ gRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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8 r) m" V# ~9 n9 k  x<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
. n$ r5 C* B5 e1 J2 k8 o8 m<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
* O; c# [, n0 b# C5 x8 b5 I<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
5 c% p- o8 B+ L<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
/ w7 |+ Y! l; d<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
0 A$ x9 N% w0 t4 e$ \) g<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
# [% f# ]- C5 `% ?+ h<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
* M  m4 T$ \1 T4 `5 o<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
- [8 _( z5 ?" z9 n! @4 b<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
, q4 s. z$ x7 O- p<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
" c) w, O2 n- l$ w6 N# H# z, h<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
5 J: \6 f- ?' g) P3 |<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
2 n9 T7 e$ O8 L: \! M<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
& b9 E! O: I0 A5 e4 v<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
0 b" ?0 Q7 r7 a% k# F; B- L<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
7 q3 k0 P) _* \( p! ?. L0 T<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
2 f) u  z% n$ x/ N! U<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
1 M0 @: I$ ]& @9 w  S% |" e4 w<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
$ i5 c6 P3 D3 ]* O9 Y<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
/ P  h, e: S" O4 H  m2 b% G<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
! I1 ]" B( y8 a7 I! b) u' r) p<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
2 w) l- I' v# f) p. b<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
+ a; w$ k+ l- x. I<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
* b. F# a7 E, x) c, d5 r+ K<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
) x  P  x6 s% [5 P- {. Q<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
! r; ?- z2 Q' [8 O, e<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
$ }4 l3 M$ G/ P0 f! l<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
6 v3 k% {- ^: O- Q5 L1 C4 o<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
) q4 C+ |% e1 L! [# h- A<P>I regret not dying</P>
3 ?  \4 B' W3 g; d; `& R0 d<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
6 V7 q  {2 J' A  G% I<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
4 t8 w) Q1 L( C  {<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
3 }, P! f9 Q4 X# a! C( ^<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
- x; F2 R: j* E) K5 _+ n<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
0 |8 x0 M6 f3 \% W% V0 m, v- q& D5 Z/ v<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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: u$ U, \$ e; `& C 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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8 u# M  A- S) k7 ]2 \6 U<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>