【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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# j7 z( t6 r. @" l" k歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
( R- i2 Z5 T# p: {! s% E# xWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
0 a9 q8 @/ k7 QThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
# p) `4 E$ G7 W# o* t6 @With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
8 A8 [4 }0 c( l4 y9 a5 EIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
  W9 j# B( r+ k/ _: i3 EYou needn’t fear anything
9 t/ @+ |2 N- I4 KMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
. Y/ |0 Y1 S- D4 S, YCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
. J" Q4 t4 k. [$ ?The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
4 }$ E5 z/ f& I$ ?I want so much to see inside your heart
5 n4 A: U3 \: x% T- {, DI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
' k. U5 h8 B# U* |* cI’m still filled with fear
7 r: h' n9 Q- a; R. M  vYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
# y, M& D$ z) U: II regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
9 F' ?% `/ p) U; z& }% |- K: W9 tYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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7 ~) t% _$ Q, Q6 i4 X<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
# J: ]; q4 g- R$ ^8 t$ w; j5 r0 e<P>月光闪亮 </P>
$ {+ J& K) `" x# _! c<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
" ^# o( u* w4 n9 U( ^$ p& E% t' a<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
, [1 ]8 Y& ~6 z9 o% Y( l6 e<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
! s' ?! o2 e' R" A. h0 U' @. R" ~+ [<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
1 k" R8 H' a% ^  C' A9 f<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
( ~; S' L1 U& y! Q<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
4 v  d9 i8 W; s5 |- V<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
1 C% [; C9 b, w; G<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
3 I5 N; g' |! q<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
/ F* W& ~4 k/ k/ p0 [5 _<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
5 b9 L1 W0 u: e5 d) ?<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
% |' B+ G* Y( `2 {<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
# B+ R6 e4 d5 q2 ]<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
: E% H: _# b& h* ]. m. L<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
! Z$ Q5 z! |/ r( B5 Q! M- Z<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
; y7 c0 }. G6 e& _7 f3 H; v+ w% L<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
) L9 [2 y/ O. C  K) E<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
+ W7 p% e- n4 q- F<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
0 K! c1 W$ K" k3 L# A6 s<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
9 R4 I1 k* {6 ~7 f8 {<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
1 e( i# f! y  |  o9 x5 e<P>I only have one tongue </P>
3 F! P5 ], U+ t<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
: M/ I/ o1 Y, {2 ^9 m<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
& x2 J" Z- {$ K$ G, R( I<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
3 C. h- y. ^) b) u! c<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
* h' e9 r3 S) V6 p6 ?" C9 F/ T% P& p<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
1 G' _3 A& H7 m" Z<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
" F" R! |* C" M0 ?* t5 n<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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2 H# h6 C' J6 b" A9 e 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>