【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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2 }0 c( O" v% S" k8 u3 Z* H% B歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
; O( t+ q' {  `3 o8 ^The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
' w* {- o% y  p3 N* V+ WWith the moon kissing it every night
  V. L; G- m4 kSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
/ q: b4 s4 t* f1 a" }My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
% ]! {- Q% A- J! W. ?4 qI love you I love you with all my heart
! t9 |0 V: O4 B7 j* ]+ ONothing can compare to my love
3 o* D* [1 Y* W9 sCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
% V' @8 E: K( p4 n' aI want so much to see inside your heart
, V3 C# N: g5 J- t* ~I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
/ @2 H  x% o, Y' l- y/ m$ pYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
* w/ X" h& L7 U' c2 G/ G$ {' MYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
- A5 b& f* Z0 h1 C1 O2 Q  ERambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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& v6 v- B$ R4 z7 T& y  L5 Y/ I3 P<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
. e* V! O$ t$ F/ x) J<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
, |9 _% l2 }/ L0 l! ?- x$ ^8 y<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
2 `4 @* O1 b8 s5 V5 l<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
% M) R1 o6 o/ L. {3 v9 Q<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
3 f- m: E& t- p, |: F<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
* S, E6 X2 ~/ k+ w5 }<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
$ A5 @* m& K1 s<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
4 q+ y5 v$ s6 ~, M' G. N6 ?, B<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
) F& b2 R6 A, p% _. c8 F<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
- b3 M* }3 H  v8 L5 `<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
, m3 z' K- u8 y1 J( w3 h7 R; v( @<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
: a9 F2 k8 F" P1 U6 F<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
+ f2 f1 W2 R- i, A0 N- v<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
* D! ^3 l" F% R& b+ W$ E9 c3 E<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
( m& m- {/ ^4 z8 ^6 r$ e' l<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
' C9 L" J4 {8 g# |( r, r% {<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
5 M7 Y- Y2 A! _- L& R) t% M+ i( u<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
% ~2 P3 n# f$ i# V$ J& Z- a<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
& L* H) e% A. g, @! e6 [<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
! b) z0 x  s0 B* ~- `<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
$ \* s1 ^9 Q8 x: i! E' T<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
" w7 W% t" {: e9 D8 g8 q( C3 i, T<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
3 A/ J5 J% G5 T1 L* `3 L+ L" j<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
5 m& S0 P' j  h4 y/ [<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
2 M6 t8 Z% s, I; J0 p% T- \  W<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
, p0 P" n1 h1 u5 s" d' o( u! t<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
6 ^) \* p: g2 B/ b: X2 k" a+ b<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
3 e  M- C, a  `) ?# I: b8 j<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
7 h5 s, n  r5 R3 \1 y# L<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
' h4 P$ x  ]  [7 L' l) U& |<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

7 Z. E) m% P' j 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>