【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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! g8 @$ z  ]! X4 x# O歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
# U: M+ c) \5 M9 lMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
1 t5 @; X" R4 k1 aThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
; y# a6 y: X2 e, E" V; bSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
: [  S& q* I: Y2 V2 iYou needn’t fear anything
& k5 [' A% D, y6 F! ?My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
5 G' w$ h2 b2 }) w+ f! kEvery other word you utter is love
5 l: H  E! D# q. n& B7 T6 NI really want to know just how much you love me
& y) H' J! g* e8 t. G" O5 wI love you I love you with all my heart
/ ^9 O- Z; E; n5 F0 ?) [Nothing can compare to my love
# c7 c2 i2 \% C" O7 VCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
5 x0 D/ b7 S" I% s$ i7 L5 q  pYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
$ i* t1 z" R; s: VYour speech can’t even keep up with it
+ R- `0 m% K! q: ?+ X8 `2 F2 GIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
4 p9 d- j0 l$ nRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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, I7 M! n' ]  A/ U<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
3 J# W! S/ _1 l8 q<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
+ [' V% P. c, o7 S<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
+ ]5 ?4 Y  |3 Y) h) ^<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
0 G; [0 @  V+ ~* a$ ]<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
, r$ Y! ^+ a: t1 ^, q; i<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
( ]8 t7 S: w: s/ J9 E<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
* O+ X: W2 q- _1 ^) @$ x! z<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
# o' T/ C3 ]9 F; D2 U! y- Q<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
! f; F1 D# y2 Y8 K<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
, z7 x3 ?& H, w% s<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
' w0 d1 h' Y5 k<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
7 ?* Q4 ?/ k7 V- T/ K* g: T<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
. `5 b1 ]5 m5 _' x; e6 O<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
6 r0 y* Q8 _/ k. B) T6 @! X<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
! O% s" d* D: t1 @  F. M<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
4 x4 O( K7 D% y- \( }& D<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
* \; C5 N( K; x<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
& a; `0 ^/ d8 V, I; N) e1 n1 _* A) `<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
8 S+ i. J9 s9 V6 w  E4 ^<P>I only have one tongue </P>
" y9 m& J* W6 j& Z: E9 B1 z<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
% X  o+ O1 `) V  k7 X# B<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
7 ?5 X4 o7 x" [8 r' {- L<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
9 |& j; n+ |# d. d8 Y; ^<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

/ B5 Z/ v) [. S* T$ @) j; X& u 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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( \! t$ G/ G5 L+ d<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>