【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
. Q6 `; \$ m- k- e6 i  K+ ~0 DFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
* `/ j9 q& o5 t6 LWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
3 [* ]! e; b) I! ~# T; F0 |I would probably know how you feel
" `5 P/ b( p* jLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
: ?+ Z! g, t/ j  `4 `But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
5 v  [( q8 J6 D4 U: a2 u+ eIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
* j! M5 _7 w# s4 E: dEntrust my love within your heart
* W( I' Q5 L, U8 c0 \7 Q2 K: y+ `# HLove… just the word love
, I9 ?3 p% a3 V! [Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
9 _+ z5 f+ T! x1 B* o, S6 ^: TI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
) Z, G7 N6 i4 s: d5 q/ W6 w: tCan I entrust it to you?
8 o2 f/ }3 a0 g' I2 \) V2 U6 J: aEntrust my love within your heart
- Y+ d7 ]! E$ F$ H; ICan I entrust it to you?
: a! g2 ^6 T$ j4 pEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
& w+ r" [& d/ Z7 Y<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
, F) ]! n' e  m& n' L<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
5 ^8 K9 I0 I$ P# Y$ l<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
' h5 u" W. h6 c7 q+ I<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
% o4 @1 U7 S4 t/ Y9 V8 L<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
4 q' j9 C  t. M8 I<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
+ ]6 w4 K! |' K  a<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
* w  D7 |6 S6 F' D<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
0 _& ~7 i6 Z# c0 {2 r! F<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
% J8 \- R0 q( l. X<P>我想说我爱你</P>
( p( ]( ?# ^, L  E1 P4 x9 w<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
/ A( h, V0 o( E* b/ E) P<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
1 v1 Q$ l7 @4 c. [/ Z# ]  W1 j<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
) }& u) J/ j* o$ W1 o: v<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
% N* F5 r, p6 b3 l, O<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
& A) P5 ~  I; G<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
. U. j# B' ~6 E: Z7 n<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
6 s! ?. p# R" w6 O, O<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
8 ^7 J: [. R' \% W1 y<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
' o/ J8 Z8 Q' F" M5 v<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
$ z8 [" ]; F. G<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
# Q" U) F" {+ g7 ]" `' U" I  W<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
; i6 C# u2 z; |! D/ u: S4 h$ [# g<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
* {, K' i0 m' `% ?- @- \2 Y<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
: [% e. \8 x; {1 r4 @<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
. e. C( K: @5 }<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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. v' h3 ^" c4 M4 q 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>