【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
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I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
  A. Z* B+ a9 ]) |( d$ @But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
  \* w2 O, u# Q$ O! U) ^. yIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
. ~! o4 n! q. Q& {' wOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
6 I! k4 d- g  O7 ?5 _If today isn’t too late,
# s) ?) C9 H# s2 c4 A- z/ y: FI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
. X( Y9 Y& {3 J8 c3 OCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
9 d7 o7 q6 w9 ^, y" uOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
- d) \6 r7 T0 Y6 UI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
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Can I entrust it to you?
  S3 O( s' w5 [Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
5 |# @  ~2 |2 x; M4 f& h& P4 E<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
, k9 W7 M, D# P, S2 q8 t# ^<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
7 j. ~! v4 y/ y3 N; v0 S+ |/ r/ L<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
- ?" U5 r1 O; g<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
0 H- ?3 T( u9 b. `<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
3 i! h+ U: E) L<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
5 W8 O  H0 }* V: j! n: X3 V<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
" n% Q# @/ f' I3 T<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
' D  A9 J+ h, D, g2 O; M- E<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
" ^# _) L& Q  [<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
0 i0 |) `0 F5 @: }0 j* s<P>我想说我爱你</P>
; G3 \1 @/ ?" {6 \* J% ]3 v/ c6 Y( m" K<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
/ ^- g$ l& Y  O: ?5 h4 l3 j<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
" i) x6 V1 h. y4 L0 k<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
3 c0 a; l% I  n7 |# J+ m: d<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
3 I- R0 ^# J4 d# H<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
; S# d+ c  N* J3 u<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
" X) e6 V# [1 X" r2 F/ V<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
& N- \2 I! R( L, \# P  X6 v4 H<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
3 ^9 j- n% _# R0 |  s2 U+ z<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
% e9 l' e) j! q' @  z<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
* F$ h9 _! W' ^7 N) c, ]1 d<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
! ?( ]+ R  y% C$ Q0 q7 [( Y$ [<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
8 y3 L8 ?$ H4 }" |6 S9 J: p& t& |<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
" b: X) }/ P0 l<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
, x, L+ x) |0 K4 x* H4 D<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
' K7 D, p6 F0 Q8 |* y<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
8 j! l/ X% }1 o<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
1 Z3 M* U. z9 u# E: O5 ?$ K<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
6 l  u5 t: J: ]& f% s3 v: x  i% @<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>