【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
" D2 d0 J1 t6 K8 t" m! i6 `0 nThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
7 V/ l8 z5 l9 FFrom the first moment we met,
- E) B* j1 i6 Z7 i( z( Z! cI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
6 w) U8 L) @8 R1 M1 H! j! t7 }If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
' i2 K1 x- H( PI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
2 {7 L+ T* A( j- C( X4 K3 u/ qI want to confess that I love you,
. y8 ?' v7 h' [: k  WBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
- D1 Q1 I# x6 e  h' g* j% l( dIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
* S6 _6 @9 i; z7 ~2 \$ T2 eI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
- X$ n% c+ j7 v* M0 E4 P% REntrust my love within your heart
2 I$ Z7 d' Q, }6 X: N9 u% lLove… just the word love
4 f8 m+ D' t/ j. s" k2 x# AWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
2 d. i3 E6 D5 f5 [; j$ QBut I never did
+ m% Q7 T& g5 ^- u! B7 }4 fOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
* j( x' ~  z; c. QIf today isn’t too late,
) S( K$ Q/ Q- x$ EI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
- t( \/ X8 h# r9 E0 S) h4 eCan I entrust it to you?
  K! D* R- x. l9 ]) _5 kEntrust my love within your heart
& k. a; l) w" s+ ICan I entrust it to you?
1 `  d1 R7 W6 ^2 D( G% X) nEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
% W# X5 _" k/ U# {  ~, Z7 i: n<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
9 Z. D/ e1 ^% p% `4 y<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
, H" r+ V/ O$ ~% q<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
5 j5 _/ V0 K: s" G( Z<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
* |. i/ d/ w; G+ b4 `, ^1 [0 u( j' l<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
# T' T/ _0 O0 ^# f<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
7 c" p, q. \* z! M! ]% B/ L' X0 A<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
7 i) s/ U* l6 w8 z. o7 g' v<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
+ }$ e4 x0 b% L5 k<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
+ L5 c/ u) T) E( s<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
, i/ J* K' J4 R7 |. |: w<P>但我不会</P>
, u: R3 Z# Y  g$ P<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
, @' E: U) A/ d<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
" w1 B- ~! ?, n) [! z<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
( S4 y& a5 i8 F' `* Y<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
. m; [1 Q9 r5 I6 m+ F5 V<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
6 c- {- f9 x- }3 p3 |) v2 ]<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
" _5 `1 T. a6 I6 }1 l<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
+ u3 G% {/ q: o( k  p<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
+ t) L+ b8 {. {5 a7 L. O) F<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
/ {3 _0 C  X; q# O' {1 c4 m<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
7 q& }7 H6 r. u9 q3 l" s0 u<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
! v$ P' Y  |/ h4 v& e<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
& b* c" C- b* Z<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
" V/ D' V9 ?5 t' G! U3 G<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
! O& L" [5 r! G1 o<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
* f  ]+ U" I7 v+ B. @: a# l' _<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
  @5 Q+ f. b, R; ?, ^<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

5 c3 \6 F& r3 _0 X. q0 ~3 E这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

1 _$ m6 j; Z+ H# S+ l( b. h: _这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>