【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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" q$ Z' W9 k4 Y4 ~  u9 V: f$ v我另将歌词附在此。
2 d0 a1 ^3 b0 m( UThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
: j4 g0 `$ f: \6 f; c8 }5 z, T  wThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
% @" B6 e2 G: t  iI already loved you with all my heart
. {8 A/ N0 l' k+ Z- \% @7 _We meet and talk everyday,
1 i" u9 x% ^9 q' I- NBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
7 Y3 i. }7 _- O3 i& O8 LI would probably know how you feel
; N7 }" Y$ ^1 DLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
! V6 |& |( \. `- ?- g0 OBut I never did
9 X! X, c9 T9 b4 C+ l$ @% QOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
" m, p9 a, @* C9 C) t" DI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
7 r& k9 [! ]/ L0 D/ rI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
. F; K" Q3 w% x. k+ AEntrust my love within your heart
: h+ z/ Q- e. {: r7 N" Y8 ~  WLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
  R& b& ^5 a( E9 C- c5 w$ }( NOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
' f$ S9 ^$ z' V9 v0 \% ?2 B8 b" PIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
8 C' s' h7 U. I: `Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
7 S, o! \+ `* b  b- x% CCan I entrust it to you?
3 a& W( g) t% e5 T4 b4 h1 GEntrust my love within your heart
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: ^: i: L( a0 ~[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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; q0 b8 \& U) J! j- W3 [<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
5 \# d- j  ?/ r9 M( a: d<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
! h! z5 p" P" G+ \% X/ e<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
9 d) b$ i8 M0 f: l$ s  C<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
1 l" E2 N! f$ T7 K8 e. V! y( s<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
& z) E3 G9 i* D, A) _" N; h<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
: S& O% D. S2 b1 G. `( d6 O<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
# U& b2 |$ `* k( s& q<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
4 Q8 n/ k% M" j<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
5 H- }( H1 W' M3 M<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
! g, `1 z! a1 J# k0 E+ X% S<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
" U# U' v' m" E. H<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
+ Y" W+ ~7 w& ^' a<P>我想说我爱你</P>
* C/ U" J4 U8 ^* A/ i0 ?<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
, i+ R5 A) A4 R2 m4 O; P/ J<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
: ]! o4 B5 E- [9 f& p<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
: w4 m+ _8 ~. z9 r8 F2 e<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
0 r8 w$ J/ N' X<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
0 \, E; o. D2 `' P. |8 }8 c<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
& v) t  ]/ P; U" q5 ^<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
5 r' g6 [6 H) l) G, n* M<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
9 Y7 l1 ]% G2 i- b* u0 h0 p. X<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
0 ^" w* x9 {- H<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
& R" C/ I9 v% x6 U6 k) P<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
/ \( ~9 I5 |" {9 A<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
2 {7 N2 ?5 f1 Y* v7 F+ e. d- F<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
3 \5 U% {. p+ J. Q5 E$ E: P<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
+ M" R8 [$ J* T<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
( A5 j! M/ `  ]; V) ?+ w0 n: e<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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8 H5 E/ I+ u8 z- N, ~ 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

' b, j% K1 R6 C: E- {! ~4 ^# u% K! M+ t这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>