【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
0 J! W; Q7 [/ A/ G9 V1 W$ v; ?( vThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
, s' ~3 G0 x7 I6 Q$ [. xI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
' ]$ H7 o# l: ~4 H9 a2 FIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
( {' V% q8 [# O) @: H! `Love… just the word love
& l: e: u; h9 p- ]Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
% S0 ?, I" s& w1 T) Z0 G7 dBut I never did
3 x$ n# l5 G9 Y8 d" fOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
/ n( o1 l" }# A& nIf today isn’t too late,
, T8 y' G1 ^" V7 I5 H4 d: ~I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
3 S6 b: Q) v4 q- TEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
) e" F$ C. r8 Y" [+ qOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
) U7 Q1 o) c0 `: j$ d$ }1 xIf today isn’t too late,
: q3 P  L) @, N5 oI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
. H0 Q5 u  s/ _5 v. c$ N# M  aI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
0 ^9 H9 t  Q; i& P: d! }Entrust my love within your heart
0 Z- c- m# }& `1 p" [Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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- l- l1 d+ D9 L<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
- p( M2 i4 O4 U% {<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
7 \: T9 h, n3 q5 F<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
5 ?; y6 q6 n' [<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
* f2 J. d( [9 F, g& O# J9 V  g<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
. ~% N' R- Z' p" J' i6 d, Y<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
. N7 O8 B# P, ~' R<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
7 ~* [2 b5 J5 ~, P) W# o# M/ c<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
9 x# B, X4 v0 F+ ~" Y+ v<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
4 G" Q: Q$ I' ^, }' w2 ^4 H) j6 ?<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
) j3 f0 r8 ^% k- L6 K; [. k<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
, X* q( D) o/ I6 m( V<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
7 g+ a% b& m2 ?* \<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
; m! ^9 x& j6 C3 y  `& w! I! e2 }5 y<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
( t7 e6 @  \5 b9 Y7 `; z& l<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
) K: d  c. S, T: t7 x9 \<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
2 g, ~$ o% C% V/ o# r<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
3 ?, q) f+ F7 A1 N<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
! H9 Q9 s$ c) s) C. d% s. U<P>Love… just the word love </P>
( j+ d5 H( d' y! A) s" X<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
  G0 J  }, D8 S7 E( ?<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
5 J, J( d$ Z: `' o<P>But I never did </P>
! K! o% V$ T' v. w<P>但我不会 </P>
- ]! ^. o: s/ ]6 F1 u+ q( h) {<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
' d8 Y# ?1 W7 j' C<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
6 ^7 j" B- ?/ M; q. |9 q, H<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
$ E* @/ H) f" D) Q1 x, B/ u# i<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
. E( W0 }) J, g! Z" F<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
* p( O5 M! [, y$ ~' e- W<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
  }4 F( m8 y/ d1 {" |4 \. |' _% r<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
2 Y: P& N- z" z) k7 r3 o0 X7 G<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
# q1 M) w: ]  x0 h: N<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
, T1 y; g7 v1 K, J; K, W! s<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
: L! N6 g& h; g7 P) Q$ g& `5 @<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
" k  v" s3 |5 ?' G+ \4 H0 O9 E<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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  O; a+ |. F" z这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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- \" I8 [% y2 Q5 \7 a<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>