【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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7 o& |8 g( M! h- K/ o0 @8 }我另将歌词附在此。
* l; @9 Z6 n' {The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
6 f  r. Y. Z2 Q, r! e. zThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
, S, f1 D  a  QBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
2 `: e! |9 y) [" S" w7 eIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
# X1 U' O6 P8 K% a! q+ |I would probably know how you feel
8 [' R) J4 K0 U4 b) ^2 b4 gLove… just the word love
% b; J1 N6 b9 N7 a5 u* o( aWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
6 O9 V! Q% D, C1 Q! Y) mOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
; i# @% h2 @/ C- k* _If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
) v6 P4 g' L( P& jI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
; i8 n) ?7 a7 {Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
* k* T8 o. l  q: `" c, MOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
* `0 L4 g7 h3 B0 CI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
: L' K5 U  x2 j6 HEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
# ~' I9 z# t4 I) H. }* DEntrust my love within your heart
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7 v$ V( E% A( L5 C. j' s( T; o9 Z[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

' y( S9 \, z. [( N<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
/ V. k  _7 S: S" l4 j# f/ q( J" @<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
, N9 F; f' D* Q: z$ Z<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
, N2 ^4 y! L. p& O/ A8 d7 E<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
8 g6 m0 @/ v4 v<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
% I: k  H9 Y, d, C% K8 V8 D- m<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
. {0 y/ V$ n0 u0 n<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
3 C6 h* S0 T4 x3 @<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
0 K  T! a/ F& k8 @2 [7 e4 d; \/ j  {<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
- N+ _" a( [+ A( r. f8 E" e<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
- p: T. S1 x6 _) p  H<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
" V" u& P/ i7 O% b) G8 _% {  _<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
0 `0 q, a2 L0 J1 K* D( T<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
1 H: y1 W+ V$ i9 b; i& S+ C9 E<P>我想说我爱你</P>
, D* t: g/ I# Z6 b/ @5 V% P& |<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
* i7 K3 X5 @. F3 \<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
" C, y7 x& I7 ^( ~" X0 J<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
( \3 c% t7 I5 w% `2 z. O. ]<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
' U( V; o0 S# n3 E3 s7 R0 z<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
5 z' n% ^2 }- q. y, @<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
" ]% _$ {# {; i/ o3 ~! y<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
7 ^4 s' \& }7 Q9 {. D<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
9 a. y2 x5 q! Z* S2 ^0 f  V<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
  ]3 u0 W/ C  _" L<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
/ @4 v! j) W- d<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
2 w1 s7 Q1 r8 Y  l<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
' j/ Q2 {" L& L' p' ?9 G& d<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
: ^/ r5 A$ H# W8 _6 t4 v<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
8 T* C5 O0 z: V: v9 V! H( V<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
" K. V8 L" ~* C/ p$ i, H<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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4 ]3 I! v8 E8 j8 v$ [4 H# ?; ?6 Q( | 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

4 e) V9 C/ d$ l' q& k这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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$ N) n' z1 n, K3 ]: Q<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>