【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
1 |+ r( g0 u. G* JWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
3 ?- P; k6 D9 F2 A2 S% ~2 k$ BIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
! ]* |4 F3 t+ pLove… just the word love
6 m2 I$ T8 s, O+ }) QWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
$ J+ F, W# U; H  z1 s- vOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
& U2 G" `4 _9 [* w8 t) D8 oIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
4 K' }4 ~) B$ R9 N4 H. eCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
+ f6 g7 n, k: jLove… just the word love
7 I  H/ r; M: m9 N( u6 x2 r8 _5 ZWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
7 Q& X; Q* d, eBut I never did
: i/ R: x; G; nOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
* D* P; u/ ?; I) M0 [. PI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
" Z- \+ q; @: N: K% DCan I entrust it to you?
% f8 A& F7 _( ^  m: }& W% `) d* yEntrust my love within your heart
/ j  L3 U2 x' I8 aCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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& Z3 y. l0 R% S7 [! F* r2 s% h+ r8 [[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
8 P- }: i" B8 `7 H<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
; W1 t/ O1 j' y" ~<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
- [3 [& ^3 V3 K, ?0 a<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
1 [: o$ U2 s" F<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
& l, `- \5 C) S% z% v; @/ y<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
6 V# x- c* d, C6 h$ \9 [' |<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
, \  D4 P2 K3 H( m<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
' v* a0 Q2 u- m<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
9 Q; A1 q( w7 a* T7 O0 Z: T& R<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
6 {6 Q3 ^* q. ^; \& J<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
4 y' S9 V+ ^. Z- N) r<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
$ ^+ w3 s( a7 _  `' m6 O9 s8 p<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
4 z4 S5 R! i: W1 X* C$ t: a<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
- R  z* a) E5 w" w<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
0 n! D) N5 c- j( U<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
) V2 t0 m# b; O2 f9 \<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
3 L" {1 X& \# @; D" P<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
: q" u: M8 B& F1 D1 V5 {<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
( z/ d5 J' V8 p* C  A<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
+ f8 m+ \; w% c: E<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
$ s* H5 U" a% K9 \- M' C. i0 K<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
- z$ A3 K) G" g# X- H9 }4 `<P>Love… just the word love </P>
: Z/ ?9 u  D2 R$ C8 L* n<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
  @5 k1 b) I+ x<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
; G  {/ U* N: A  e1 `# L8 h<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
% }" ^& n2 C- U4 ]% q<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
/ U# q8 h3 C0 A# J, W" ?$ S<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
5 o: ]9 X% c4 V0 `. q<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
7 |- [( f3 M/ w! a<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
9 n( p4 b7 j; ~3 ~8 I<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
/ p; C5 W" c0 ~/ T2 b# T<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>