【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
, S# v$ a1 F- v5 M1 uThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
" T5 |6 \' ]" T; o3 AFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
8 J' U9 y6 c1 J, xIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
( t4 l+ G; f, II would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
/ G" \4 a% X+ k7 PWhy is it so difficult to express?
" C8 P8 m2 \' [1 |, J4 p1 YI want to confess that I love you,
$ V8 c4 d/ k6 I  [! i+ ZBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
; \9 W, M3 o/ Q$ i/ m" jCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
, A, n) ^6 }" k: C; q. yLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
$ v0 c- s0 W$ e6 VI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
  E: }/ h+ K0 y% V6 xCan I entrust it to you?
6 r6 G1 W7 z4 q& U. bEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
3 \* h6 L9 J2 L0 l<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
  b. |9 i6 O' T2 W* D<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
8 f- ]' t9 c7 B1 j<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
  ^5 Z* U. V0 s" s$ d  x<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
1 y0 p) o5 c; e2 l<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
; ?4 H& A2 y# @4 j" X: Q6 A<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
1 ]1 e7 D& x8 ]. O& S# A& a<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
0 O; [6 A7 `  p8 [- q+ U& i<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
1 b0 m) q; b% s3 _- u' F<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
/ T3 I3 Y4 S3 s& `( D<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
* T/ J; }! X+ v9 d- {1 u<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
0 U& `/ e2 K/ w  Q5 m4 p2 J<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
* b5 b- t( g, E* T- M, T<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
" c+ P# N+ b' P0 w' Y- W5 N<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
) D5 o5 T. Q# }# y# D  U<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
# i; ^3 Y% C, `0 b) I# w% ?<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
. F" Q$ i4 M" \/ ^0 o' |<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
7 \: H) y8 n2 |$ k<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
( e, X0 G0 |, r3 h0 u<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
2 ]) y) @9 B! T- P( `$ l/ \9 G<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
/ M6 _$ ^4 c, l  I* O$ |" C<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
/ S- L4 k- D1 U7 y! z) j: j; Q; o2 H<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
. J  m$ ^6 W8 O& Y+ ^; N' T: P0 e<P>但我不会 </P>
- X2 M* }# t% L5 F1 d0 Z<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
* X" J3 p. o+ X& f<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
8 J" \, M  ]9 I7 H% B5 x<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
5 I% C  r% I! ^: u, S<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
( g( {4 \+ F1 o<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
# K# o2 m" A# }" |: o- L8 c<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
+ y4 N8 E+ j) Q6 L<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
' O0 |( R; l) W. i: E) x/ x' }+ Q5 \<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>